Monday, 1 April 2019
jasiah Free Choice writing
20/03/19
On Saturday me and my dad went to the Papakura pools at ten o'clock. My Dad was swimming in this pool I was in the shallow pool then my dad called my name. He was in the deep pool. He told me to not jump in. I thought he said jump so I jumped in in and I was drowning I was helling so he saw me drowning so he saved me. He put me out of the pool and said, ‘’why did you jump in?’’ I said I thought you said jump in! He said, ’’Let’s go have something to eat.’’ After that went home the End.
By jasiah
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