Hi Jasiah, I found it so interesting reading about your Papa and seeing the photo of him. You presented your work so clearly. It was really easy to read the questions and the answers, especially as all the punctuation was correct. I thought it was really interesting that your Papa started work at 13 but was still able to go to school. Keep up the great mahi Mr Cossey
Kia ora Jasiah! I loved reading all about your Papa, I am sure he was really glad that you interviewed him. The jump shots of your family are super cool!! I love that your family got involved. Ka pai Armstrong family!
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Hi Jasiah,
ReplyDeleteI found it so interesting reading about your Papa and seeing the photo of him.
You presented your work so clearly. It was really easy to read the questions and the answers, especially as all the punctuation was correct.
I thought it was really interesting that your Papa started work at 13 but was still able to go to school.
Keep up the great mahi
Mr Cossey
Kia ora Jasiah! I loved reading all about your Papa, I am sure he was really glad that you interviewed him. The jump shots of your family are super cool!! I love that your family got involved. Ka pai Armstrong family!
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