Hi Jasiah, You included details about your life at home using words like 'Monopoly' and "Fortnite" and "PS4". It's great to have brothers and sisters to do things with, but sometimes it can be hard to get along with them too. My boys are 4 and 2 and sometimes they play really well together and somethings they really bug each other. I hope you're doing well at that and enjoying the things you get to do together. Keep up the great work, and maybe include some punctuation? I ran out of breath before I could finish your sentence because I didn't know where to stop!!!
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Hi Jasiah,
ReplyDeleteYou included details about your life at home using words like 'Monopoly' and "Fortnite" and "PS4". It's great to have brothers and sisters to do things with, but sometimes it can be hard to get along with them too. My boys are 4 and 2 and sometimes they play really well together and somethings they really bug each other. I hope you're doing well at that and enjoying the things you get to do together. Keep up the great work, and maybe include some punctuation? I ran out of breath before I could finish your sentence because I didn't know where to stop!!!
Thank you Mr Cossey I will dp that next time
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